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Tuesday, April 12, 2011

More on Commas

Commas are the biggest problem I find in editing. Here are a few more tips to learn how to use them properly.

"Meow," said the cat purring.

Should be:

"Meow," said the cat, purring.

If you have an action separate from the statement, then there should be a comma.

Another example:

Incorrect:

"I hate dogs!" screamed the cat jumping on the table to escape the pup.

Correct:

"I hate dogs!" screamed the cat, jumping on the table to escape the pup.

Sometimes you don't need a comma.

Incorrect:

"I want to eat a bird," said the cat, as he licked his chops.

Correct:

"I want to eat a bird," said the cat as he licked his chops.

Here his action smoothly moves along without the comma.